JOHN J. CLAYTON

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Mitzvah Man

A Review in Commentary,, January, 2012
Commentary 69
The January
fiction chronicle
By D.G. Myers
Now that most American Jews have settled comfortably
into a secular way of life without much fear of
religious intolerance (except from other Jews), it’s
not entirely clear what cultural function Jewish novels
are supposed to perform. Jewish writers satisfy the demands
of residual Jewishness by dreaming up a search for
Eastern European roots (Jonathan Safran Foer, Everything
Is Illuminated
) or cooking up an imaginary world of
stateless exile (Michael Chabon, The Yiddish
Policemen’s Union
). Others mine the Jewish past
—the tragic Jewish past (Julie Orringer, The Invisible
Bridge) or the heroic Jewish past (Alice Hoffman,The
Dovekeepers
).. Just recently, though, the Jewish
religion has returned to Jewish fiction, and thank God
for that: Jewish identity has its source in a Jew’s
religious calling—it’s an app,as the saying now goes,
not a feature—which can be reactivated at any moment.
. . . .
Clayton writes
about Jews like himself—Jews who long for holiness
in a world with little patience and less appreciation
for the longing. Mitzvah Man (Texas Tech University
Press, 268 pages), his fourth novel, is about a
Jewish superhero. Adam Friedman is not a comicstrip
character who does battle with villains in his underwear.
He is, instead, an ordinary middleaged Jewish male,
a semi-wealthy software consultant living comfortably
on a cul-de-sac near Harvard University, who may or may
not perform miracles and who may or may not be a
contemporary prophet.

Adam is at his 25th high school reunion when
his beloved wife Shira is killed by a drunk driver.
He is left with a 14-year-old daughter, Lisa, and
a grief that grows as messy as his uncut beard
of mourning. At synagogue one Shabbat morning in
late spring, he listens closely to the weekly
Torah portion, which tells how the Israelites
followed God’s presence through the wilderness.
Adam feels a shiver of recognition, and rushes
home to tell Lisa that they are leaving on a
car trip. They will get in their Camry and just
head out of town, without destination. “We put
ourselves in God’s hands,” he explains. “We
let the Toyota decide. But it’s not really the car,
you understand?” Lisa is alarmed, but agrees
to go along for fear that her dad will be
locked in an insane asylum if she tells anyone.

Thus begins Adam’s adventures with “maybe
the hand of God guiding him.” They stay briefly
on Cape Cod, where they talk about God’s plan
on the sand dunes. “You see, our true life is
somewhere else,” Adam tells her. “That’s what
we’re looking for. The treasure. Our life.” So
they head off again—this time to New York. There
Adam intervenes to save the marriage of his oldest
friend. Back home in Cambridge,Lisa gives her father
a T-shirt that says “Mitzvah Man .” “I am now
officially a superhero,” Adam says proudly. He
wears the Mitzvah Man tee under his dress shirts
instead of tzitzit, the fringes Jewish males are
commanded to wear underneath their clothes.

Clayton’s premise is also emblazoned on that T-shirt.
What if it really were possible for a modern man
to be guided by God’s hand and to intervene in
human events like a superhero? Mitzvah Man
cleverly leaves open the question whether Adam is
God’s prophet or God’s fool. Maybe his deeds are
accidents, but maybe they’re not. “It’s not crazy to
know God is flowing through all things and I can ride
the flow,” Adam says, although he immediately adds:
“That’s metaphor,not religious boogie-woogie.” When he
rescues a young woman who is being raped in a Boston
park—he fights off her three drunken attackers while
she gets away—he becomes locally famous. A homeless man
at his front door asks for a handout and a Lotto tip;
he bets Adam’s birthday and hits the jackpot. Adam
foresees that a man in the synagogue is about to
suffer a massive heart attack, and saves his
life by warning him. Adam places his hands on the
head of a boy suffering from leukemia, and almost
immediately the boy is relieved of pain and goes
into remission. He begins to collect followers: “Mostly
ragged folk. Some sit cross-legged on the sidewalk
in meditation, some chant. They bow to him when he
goes out; they follow to touch his sleeve.” A Cambridge
policeman warns him to watch out for crazies. “Remember
John Lennon,” he says. His Orthodox sister-in-law scoffs
at Adam and claims he’s trying to reinvent Judaism. His
friends are squeamish and uncomfortable with Adam’s
God-talk, replying politely in the noncommittal voice
of unbelief. Adam doesn’t sound pompous or fake to
himself when he talks too openly of God (“Well.
Maybe a little fake”). He is embarrassed to receive
credit that should go, he says, to God. He tells a
Boston radio talk show host: Look. I’m not deciding
to do good. I’m trying to perform mitzvot, to follow God’s commandments.
I’m trying to listen, to do what God tells me. It’s
the exact opposite of a superhero. A Batman or Superman,
they’re full of themselves. I’m trying to be filled up
by God. That Adam is Jewishly half-educated,that he
reads Jewish texts only in translation and is fluent
only in the language of Conservative Judaism, serves
unexpectedly to make his transformation even more
convincing. But the modern secular world has no place
for a messenger from God. The Massachusetts Department
of Children and Families concludes that Adam is
delusional and removes Lisa from his home. To get
her back, Adam must stop performing deeds of derring-do
and prophecy, or at least pretend to.

Clayton is not sure how to end Mitzvah Man: those who
“have intimations of God’s world, the true world, usually
end up having to fall back into the world of compromise,”
as he says elsewhere, and the compromise is no happier
in literature than in life. But what Clayton
does know for sure, and what he demonstrates powerfully in the
course of his novel, is that unlikely events are likely to
occur when a man puts himself in God’s hands. That is more
than enough to sustain this wise and deeply satisfying
novel—yet another example that the great subject of Jewish fiction
going forward is the relationship between God and man.


Early Comments on Mitzvah Man:

"Pow! . . . Zowee! . . . . Whoosh! Mitzvah Man is the new-look superhero for the modern age, where a damaged man without super strength can still perform righteous deeds and change the world. Novelist John Clayton knows that the biblical prophets didn't want the job, and the same is true of our heros--whether they are super or merely ordinary. With great imagination and lyrical wit, MITZVAH MAN will restore your faith in the miracle of simple goodness, and remind us all that the impulse to rescue can both save a life and transcend the agony of loss--even without having to leap tall buildings in a single bound."

—Thane Rosenbaum, the author of THE GOLEMS OF GOTHAM and SECOND HAND SMOKE


John J. Clayton is back and more luminous than ever, deeper, too, and funnier. Mitzvah Man is mightier than mere mortals, especially in the super-hero t-shirt his daughter has made him. Plus, he's got the guidance of Jewish law to power his good deeds, a righteousness funded not by pride but by mourning. Clayton's people are as real as my friends and family, and give me as much to worry about and even love. Reader take heart! Your cries have been heard! Mitzvah Man is here!

—Bill Roorbach, the author of TEMPLE STREAM, THE SMALLEST COLOR, BIG BEND

“A fascinating, extremely well-crafted, important work . . . about middle-class, assimilated Jewish American life, and its real need for connections to a faith that has come to seem almost irrelevant.
—Sanford Sternlicht, author of THE TENEMENT SAGA


INTERVIEW ABOUT MITZVAH MAN
in The Jewish Ledger
at http:/​/​www.wmassjewishledger.com/​2011/​09/​18/​q-a-with-john-j-clayton-amherst-writers-modern-jewish-super-hero-mitzvah-man/​

Interview and Reviews of Wrestling with Angels

INTERVIEW with Francesca Rheannon for Pacifica on WRITER'S VOICE:

http:www.writersvoice.net. The podcast is at:
http:/​/​www.writersvoice.net/​wp-content/​uploads/​podcasts/​Clayton.mp3

Publisher's Weekly Review of Wrestling with Angels:


Clayton’s new stories, gathered here with the stories from earlier collections Bodies of the Rich and Radiance, show a steady, assured hand, delivering an exceptional and gratifying body of work. “Cambridge Is Sinking!” typifies his early writing, where young, menschy hippies reluctantly let go of their politics and community in the face of day-to-day struggles, ruminating on jobs, graduate degrees and rich uncles as they try to find direction. As Clayton’s early characters turn away from their idealism, his later ones turn toward a larger search for meaning and often toward the divine. (In his author’s preface, Clayton writes “I hope for Jewish and non-Jewish readers; but I speak as a Jew.”) In “History Lessons” Daniel Rose takes his young son to the neighborhood where he grew up, uncovering a considerable sense of loss (endemic to Clayton’s stories) and a great divide between the father and son. Failed marriages, bitter children and terminal patients mark many of the tales: in “The Contract,” Max pores through holy books while his wife, Natalie, succumbs to cancer; the family finds comfort in the prayers’ familiarity, but their meanings remain obscure. Clayton repeatedly explores a limited set of situations and emotions, but he is a master of his material. (Sept.)

Selected Fiction

Mitzvah Man
Boston businessman Adam Friedman goes a little crazy—or becomes a little holy—after the death of his beloved wife.
Wrestling with Angels: New and Collected Stories
Most of Clayton's stories published in magazines and collected here for the first time; and all stories in his two published collections.
Kuperman’s Fire
A novel about Jewish heritage and about criminal evil. 2007
The Man I Never Wanted to Be
Story of a gentle, liberal professor who has to cope with a man of violence. 1998
What Are Friends For?
Love story of a seventies radical and an older woman. 1979
Radiance: Ten Stories
Runner-up for National Jewish Book Award in 1998.
Bodies of the Rich
Short stories, mostly Jewish including those appearing in O.Henry and Best American Stories collections. 1984.